Hello, my name is Gary Stephen Owens III and I am a successful amateur martial artist looking to grow my fanbase in the u.s southeast, as well as earn local notoriety to draw in students.

I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticisms regarding my instagram page: @kiddgrappler777

I would be honored to return the favor of course, and to plug you up with some likes for the algorithm. Thanks in advance. 🤙

https://youtu.be/-ygnzKuXe8k

I've combined a variety of areas of my research and distilled it to this:

Feynman Technique + Biophilia + Intrinsic Motivation + Amygdala Storytelling + Hebbian Learning + touch of comedy

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1. Write down what you know and assume to know about your chosen topic or subject matter.

2. Pretend you've become a teacher and now need to teach your students who know nothing about the topic/subject thus needing to simplify the information for easy consumption and digest.

3. Examine where your understanding/knowledge has gaps and revise to fill those gaps.

4. Simplify everything; using analogies and connecting facts to iron out contradictions or confusing statements.

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Putting into practice:

Learning to ride a bike is first done with the eyes then imagined upon until we get our bike and have to put that idea into action. Good teachers try to explain as simply as possible to teach all that is necessary to give that initial push. Seeing kids fall off their bikes causes us to realize gaps in our knowledge pushing us forwards to go back and attach training wheels. And by telling stories where our students become skilled enough to bike in the forests and enjoy themselves do we achieve mastery in learning and teaching.

Hello im trying to get into poetry and im going to be a senior soon and I've been thinking of going into literature once i graduate so any advice or constructive criticism is greatly appreciated

The Nature our eyes

The Nature in the wind The Lake in the sand The Light that shines so high The Light abroad that fly The White if a Mountain oh so high The Green in a Field that cries The Blue of a Sea far and wide The Brown Blue and Green of animals worldwide But the Nature is truly in our eyes

Thank your for reading :)

I am starting my life from scratch at 40, and have no professional writing experience.. that's okay, because I have no experience in anything else, either 😂. But when I was younger, I wrote quite a bit. I'm not very fresh on my grammar anymore, and very rusty in every aspect of writing.
My friend gave me an opportunity to interview him about the kentucky derby and turn the info into an article, so I took it. However, it was only a couple of days ago, and the derby is already tomorrow, so I nervously tried to put it together quickly. This is literally the first time I've tried to write anything in like 20 years.
I spent 2 days and about 20 hours, on what I considered to be a beautifully written article. Went to add the title, and poof. It was all gone. Accidentally hit the 'back' button. Held back tears, cussed quite a bit, buried myself in pillows, and had to make the decision to just say screw it, or start it all over again. So, I spent this morning trying to rush this article out to Medium. The article isn't anywhere close to what it was, but I knew if I didn't post something, I'd never get started. (I've been talking about starting a blog for months) Here's the link to the article that I had to turn back into an interview (with permission) because I had no time to reconstruct it, yet again, before Derby day, tomorrow. Any constructive criticism you could offer would be super. I know it's rushed, and not very personable.. I had to cut out a lot, due to sheer lack of time.. but I'll accept the obvious, and would really appreciate any input. Don't hold back. I just want to get better. I think I can, with some direction. Thanks guys. https://link.medium.com/bNzRR3hKTfb

I just want some tips and advice on the new channel👍 https://youtu.be/coCBTPl5oMU