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female [Written] Wanton Woods, Part 2: She followed her name into the trees [OC] NSFW
Wanton Woods, Part 2
For adults 18+ only. All characters are adults. Dark erotic fiction: monster and tentacle sex, consensual (she says yes before anything starts), edging, crude language.
Part 1 left her hearing her name in the trees. Here she walks in after it. By Part 3 the woods stop being patient.
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I stood up. Nobody made me. The pull was there, low and warm under my navel, and I stood up into it on purpose, which is different from being pulled, I swear it is. Jess grabbed my wrist. “Mel. I made up the rules, I can unmake them.”
“You can’t unmake rules,” Danny said, but quiet.
Sit down. Eat the ghost pepper candy. Cry in the pink bathroom. Go to bed with Jess and let the bed tell on nobody.
I put my boots on. The laces were wet and my fingers shook so bad it took three tries to double knot them, and when I stood up I felt it, the soaked seam of my leggings pressed right up into me, cold on the outside and hot underneath, sticking to my lips when I shifted, and my clit throbbed against it so hard I had to stand still a second with my hand on the doorframe and let it.
Owen got the flashlight from the drawer by the stove, the big yellow heavy kind, and clicked it on and off and held it out. Then didn’t let go. So we were both holding it, his hand on the grip and my hand on his hand, his knuckles rough from the climbing gym, warm.
“I’ll come,” he said.
“To the tree line.”
“Further. If you want.”
If you want. I wanted so bad it closed my throat. “Bottle picked me,” I said, and my voice did that thick low thing again, and he let go.
Outside it was way colder than before, like the yard sank into a freezer while we were inside. The moths were gone from the porch light. All of them. Everybody crowded out on the porch behind me, Nadia’s teeth chattering, Jess going “Oh my god, oh my god” under her breath, and Owen walked me across the gravel, crunch, crunch, his shoulder near mine, to where the light stopped like a wall.
“Five minutes,” he said. “Then I’m coming in after you.”
“Okay.”
“I mean it, Mel.”
His eyeliner had smudged almost to his cheekbones. He lifted his hand like he was going to touch my face and I stopped breathing, do it, touch my face, do it, please, and he put it in his hoodie pocket instead.
I walked into the trees.
The second I passed the first trunk the porch light went away. Gone, a door shutting on it. But I could still hear them. Jess going “oh my god” thin and far, Danny saying something, the screen door banging, every bit of it coming through the trees clear as anything and from the wrong direction, from my left, then from ahead of me, then from everywhere.
Sound carries out here. Everything carries. It just won’t tell you where it’s coming from.
I turned around and the cabin wasn’t there. No light, no gravel, no Owen with his hands in his pocket. Trunks packed so tight I couldn’t have squeezed between them, and my boot prints going back maybe three feet in the wet leaves and then stopping, the leaves smooth past that like nobody had ever walked there.
“Owen?” And then louder, “OWEN?” From somewhere, ahead or behind, I couldn’t tell, his voice came back, “Mel?”, small and far and from the wrong side.
Okay. okay okay okay. Straight line. Walk back in a straight line. Every direction looked the same, black bark and wet leaves, and I spun with the flashlight and my mouth tasted like metal, and under the fear, so stupid, there was the pull. Right below my navel. Like a string tied there and somebody way out in the dark picking up the other end and giving it one slow little tug.
“ah…!” Out loud, like he’d touched me there.
Don’t go that way. That has to be away from the porch. Owen’s back there somewhere counting to five minutes.
I went that way.
The trees got older, bark cracked deep and gray, roots twisting up through the leaves, moss on everything glowing faint green when the beam hit it, and the air got warmer, which made no sense, warmer and wetter and sweet, resin and smoke and honey and something musky under it like skin, like somebody’s neck.
Then the moaning came back. Far off first, so far it could have been the creek, one long low groan and a girl’s voice riding on top of it. I stopped. It stopped. I took a step and it came again, closer, and now I could hear her breathing in between, “ah… ah… ah…” in little bursts.
Ten more steps and there were more of them. Left, then right, then all around, somebody whimpering “Please… more… mmh, more…”, a groan so deep I felt it in my ribs, wet sounds, slapping, a scream that broke into a laugh. Close enough now I could hear the wet. Close enough to hear a girl say “there, right there,” into somebody’s neck.
My hand was flat on my stomach over the string. I’d put it there without noticing. My thighs slid together with every step, my leggings dragging, so wet now it squished, actually squished, slick and warm, and the cold couldn’t touch it.
That’s your pussy making that sound. Out here. With Owen’s flashlight in your hand.
You’re soaked for strangers in the woods while Owen is out there in his raccoon eyeliner waiting at the porch light. What is wrong with you. What is actually wrong with you. Keep walking.
Something warm touched the back of my neck. Air. One slow breath, warm and damp, right at my nape, and then gone, and I spun and the beam showed trees.
I walked. Twenty steps. It came again, lower this time, on the side of my throat, and it stayed longer, long enough to feel it go in and out, long enough for the little hairs to stand up all down my arms and my nipples to pull tight under Jess’s top.
Somebody’s breathing on you. Somebody’s right behind you breathing on you and you’re not running.
Then a third time. It didn’t leave. It came in slow over my skin and went out slow, warmer every time, closer every time, until I could feel the shape of a mouth in it, and I stopped walking and stood there and let it, my eyes closed, my pussy clenching in slow pulls with every breath like it was breathing too.
“Melody.”
Right in my ear. Breath on my neck, hot, a voice so low it went down my spine like a fingertip, and half a beat behind it the trees said it too, all of them, soft.
I screamed and spun and the beam went everywhere, trees, sky, my own boots. Nobody. My neck was wet where it breathed. Just a little. Like lips had almost been there.
Run. Which way. The string tugged. My nipples ached under Jess’s top. “mmh…” I bit my lip till it hurt and kept walking.
* * *
The trees opened so fast I almost fell into it.
A clearing, round, too round, like somebody drew it with a compass, moss so thick it gave under my boots like a mattress, and light. There wasn’t a moon. The light was low and blue and came off the air itself, off the moss, so I could see all of it. Trees standing around the edge like a wall. A stump in the middle. Split logs stacked neat.
And a man with his back to me, swinging an axe.
Thunk. It hit me in the chest. The log fell in two halves and he bent and set another one up, easy, slow, the axe going up over his head like it weighed as much as a spoon. Thunk.
No shirt. In October. My breath had been white on the porch and he was sweating, it was shining all over his back in the blue light and steam was coming off his shoulders in the cold, he’s running a fever, he has to be, sweat running down the long dip of his spine into the waistband of dark pants that sat so low on his hips the two dimples above his ass showed, and his back was so wide, muscle rolling under the skin from his shoulders to his waist every swing, forearms roped with veins when he gripped. Okay. Okay so there’s a guy. A guy chopping wood at midnight in a magic circle. Totally normal. Ask him where the cabin is. Open your mouth and ask.
I didn’t ask. I stood at the edge with the flashlight pointed at the moss and watched his pants slip a little lower every time he lifted, and his ass flex under the fabric when the axe came down, thunk, and I squeezed my thighs so hard my knees knocked and that made it worse, that pressed my soaked leggings right up into me, sticky and hot. “mmh…” I clapped my hand over my mouth.
You’re making noises. Out loud. At a stranger’s back.
I stepped forward and a branch cracked under my boot so loud the whole clearing heard it.
He stopped with the axe up. Held it there. Not a twitch. His back didn’t even move, no breath in it, no rise and fall, like a photo of a man somebody had stood up in the woods. Then he let the head down slow onto the stump and turned just his head over his shoulder, and my flashlight beam happened to swing up across his face, and his eyes threw it back at me, flat and gold, the light bouncing right off the backs of them.
Then he wasn’t there.
He was behind me. No footsteps, no sound, his chest almost on my back, heat coming off him so hard I felt it through my flannel, his breath in my ear, the same breath, the same one from the trees.
“Welcome to the woods, Melody.”
His voice went through my whole body at once, low, rough, the groan from under the cabin floor turned into words, and the trees said it with him, all around, a hundred low voices half a beat behind his, Melody, and I screamed so hard my throat ripped and spun around swinging the flashlight like a bat at empty air.
He was back at the stump. Back to me. Thunk.
I stood there panting and shaking with the beam jittering all over the moss. You imagined that. You’re lost and cold and you imagined it. But my ear was hot. My neck was hot where his breath landed. And I could smell him now, pine sap and woodsmoke and fresh cut wood and that sweet musky thing I couldn’t place all the way in, and now I could. The whole forest smelled like him. I’d been breathing him for an hour. You’ve been walking around with him in your mouth this whole time.
Wait. Melody. He said Melody. You never told him your name. Nobody out here has your name. Jess calls you Mel. Owen calls you Mel. Only your mom says Melody, and Danny when he’s being annoying, and the trees through that black window at midnight.
Run, you idiot. I took a step toward him. Another. Close enough to see sweat drip off his elbow. Close enough to see his back wasn’t smooth. Four long pink scratches over his shoulder blade, fresh, raised, the exact spacing of a girl’s fingers. Somebody had been holding on to him. Tonight. Hard.
The woman in the woods. The please please please girl. That was him. He did that to her and she did that to him. Like the girl on Danny’s phone. Comes back different. And the throb between my legs got so heavy I pressed my palm hard against my belly over the string like I could hold it in.
Closer. He was so tall, way taller than Owen, I could see the side of his chest when he swung, dark hair on it, his stomach cut into hard ridges, a line of hair going down from his navel into his pants, and the front of his pants. Don’t look. You’re looking. You’re totally looking. Something heavy pushed the fabric out down his thigh, thick, a shape that swung when he swung.
I wanted to put my fingers in those scratches and see if they fit.
I could picture it. My fingertips sliding into the pink grooves, his skin hot and slick, him going still under my hand the way Owen went still when I shifted on his lap, that held breath, and my pussy gave this hard slow squeeze just from the picture, so creamy I felt my underwear slide when I clenched, “hh…”
You’re standing in his woods picturing your hands on his back, and Owen’s hands were on your hip an hour ago, and you’re wetter now than you were on his lap.
A stranger. With an axe. Who teleports, Mel. And you’re staring at his dick in Jess’s top.
“Excuse me,” I said, and it cracked. Thunk. “Hi. Sorry. I’m, I’m lost? I’m staying at a cabin at the edge of the woods, my friends are there, do you know which way?”
He set the axe down and turned.
Not handsome. Beautiful in a way that was a little wrong. Cheekbones like they’d been cut with the same axe, a mouth so full it looked bruised, stubble, and eyes that weren’t brown. Gold. Owl gold, cat gold. I waited for him to blink. He didn’t. They went down me slow without blinking once. My mouth. My neck. My flannel hanging open and Jess’s thin black top with my nipples poking it out, you wore the top, you wore it for Owen and now some forest guy is looking at your tits in it and they’re getting harder, they’re getting harder for him, my hand pressed on my stomach, my thighs, and back up.
He smiled.
Whoosh. He was gone, the air where he stood yanking at me like a truck going by, my hair blowing forward, the flashlight flickering, and when I spun he was across the clearing at the far side where the trees were thickest.
Next to a bed.
A huge one, four posts thick as trunks carved and twisted like the roots I kept tripping on, red velvet curtains tied back with gold rope, pillows, dark red sheets shining under that glow like they were wet. A museum bed. A do not touch bed. Sitting on the moss where there’d been moss and trees and that was it a second ago.
“That wasn’t there,” I said out loud. To him. To the trees. “That wasn’t there.”
You looked right at that spot. You looked right at it when you walked in. There were trees. There were just trees.
The curtains were moving. No wind. Just moving, slow, in and out. Like breathing. More than he was.
Whoosh.
He was right in front of me. I had to tip my head back. Heat came off him in a wave, sick heat, fever heat, a drop of sweat sliding down the center of his chest inches from my face, his smell so thick I could taste the sap of it on my tongue. He bent down until his lips were almost on my ear and his hair brushed my cheek.
“You know what you’re here for,” he whispered. “Don’t you.”
“N..no.” It came out a breath.
He laughed, low, I felt it in the air between us. “No?”
“It was a dare. My friends. The bottle. I’m just supposed to look and go back.”
“Then look.”
Don’t look down. Don’t. My eyes went down on their own and he just stood there and let them, his chest, his stomach, the front of his pants right there so close now, thick and long and heavy and pushing, and I swallowed so hard it clicked, and my leggings, god, my leggings were so soaked they were cold on the outside where the air hit and hot and creamy underneath, sticking to my lips every time I breathed.
I was looking so hard. The outline of the head of it pushing the fabric out almost to his hip, and a small wet spot darkening the cloth right there, and my mouth filled with spit, you want it in your mouth, you want to taste the wet spot, “mmh…”, and I didn’t even try to stop the noise this time.
“Why are you breathing like that, Melody?”
“I’m not.”
“You are.” His lips touched my ear. Actually touched it, hot and dry, moving on the shell of it when he talked. “I watched you on the porch step. You stood in my dark breathing little clouds at me and I wanted you before you ever went inside.” His voice dropped. “Then you sat on that boy’s lap with your thighs squeezed together and his thumb circling under that blanket, and you listened to me, and you got wet for me. Sitting right on him.”
“H..how do you…”
“You felt me on the porch.” His breath went down my neck. “Didn’t you.”
My knees almost went. “ngh…” Tiny. Like a hiccup.
How does he know about that. Nobody saw that. It was under a blanket. Only the trees were at the window.
“Who are you,” I said. “What’s… what’s your name?”
The smile again. Slow. “No.”
“No?”
“If I gave you my name, you could call me with it. From your little bed in your little room. From anywhere.” His knuckle found the hinge of my jaw. “And I’d come, Melody. Every time you said it. You’re not ready for that.”
“Then what are you?”
He didn’t look away from me. Around the clearing every tree leaned in, I swear, a creak running the whole circle like a held breath. “Older than the road you drove in on,” he said. “Older than the cabin. I’m what they hear every Halloween.”
He gets yours and you don’t get his. He knows your name and your hip and your porch step and you don’t even get a word to call him.
“You came past your friends. Past your boy waiting on the gravel. Past every turn you could’ve taken back. Why?”
“I don’t know.”
“Then say no again. And I’ll walk you home.” He pulled back enough to look at me with those gold eyes that still hadn’t blinked. “Say it, and I’ll take your hand and walk you to your porch light, and you’ll sleep in your squeaky bed beside your friend, and you’ll never hear us again.”
I opened my mouth.
Way off in the trees a girl sighed, long and shaky and happy, like she’d just come.
“I don’t want to go home,” I whispered.
What are you saying. What are you doing.
“I want to know what makes them sound like that.”
“Ah.” His hand came up, huge and slow, and tucked my hair behind my ear with one finger so gently I shivered down to my boots. His knuckle on my jaw, rough from the axe, hot as a mug. “There it is.”
His thumb on my bottom lip. Pressing down until my mouth came open. “mm…”
His thumb. Owen’s thumb was on your hip an hour ago and now this thumb is in your mouth, basically, and you’re letting it, you opened for it.
“I can show you, Melody. Things you’ll never find out there with your boys and your spinning bottle and your little rules. What that girl in the trees just found. What all of them found.” His mouth back at my ear. “What you’ve been thinking about since that porch step.”
I bit my lip right next to his thumb. He watched me do it.
Say no. Say it. Jess is waiting with her hands over her mouth. Owen said five minutes. Owen’s coming. Owen’s…
My hand pressed flatter on my stomach. I didn’t want no. I wanted whatever that girl in the trees had just found, I wanted it so bad my mouth was wet around his thumb, and I made myself look up into his gold eyes so he’d see me mean it.
He lifted his thumb off my lip. And waited.
Say it to his face. Out loud. Your choice, your mouth.
“Yes,” I said. “Show me.”
* * *
Part 3 coming soon.
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