Hey, it's me again :) So after reading Elantris and quite enjoying it, I decided to follow the publication order and starting reading Era 1 of Mistborn. Here's my thoughts on Final Empire.
I'm gonna start by saying that I had a lot of expectations from this book and that was probably a bad thing. Ever since I first heard about Cosmere I kept hearing how Mistborn is a really good entry point, I saw so many people claim that it's one of their favourite series ever and a majority of people ranked Final Empire specifically quite high not just in terms of Cosmere, but in terms of fantasy books in general. I'm pretty sure the Misborn series regularly ranks in the top 10, if not top 5 of r/fantasy yearly poll of favourite sci-fantasy series. So naturally, I had high expectations from this and probably went into it slightly overhyped (though I would say that I was still being cautious). I'm not entirely sure that this is one of the reasons why, but it certainly could've played a role in the fact that, well, I didn't actually enjoy this book that much.
In terms of the characters, I liked Kelsier and Vin almost instantly. Vin's character development where she doesn't trust anyone at the beginning and she slowly realises that this is what real friendship is actually like and that she finally really has people that care about her was really satisfying. Her relationship with Kelsier was also very entertaining, I liked the dynamic where they weren't really equals as it was pretty much a teacher-student hierarchy, but yet they treated themselves as equals most of the time, with Kelsier trusting Vin that she can handle herself in dangerous situations and Vin not being afraid to stand up to Kelsier when she though he was wrong.
I didn't really care too much about the rest of the crew though, except for Breeze who I found pretty charming. And that's where my first big criticism comes in: I found the crew a little underdeveloped. Aside from Kelsier and Vin who are the main characters, everyone else felt kinda just like a stepping stone for Vin to learn more about allomancy, but there wasn't much more to them than that. Sure they each had their unique personality, but I never felt like they were really developing it much. In terms of actions, they also didn't really do much, they were doing a bunch of stuff off-screen but that's the thing, it was off-screen. And since the story ended up playing out the way it did, most of these off-screen actions felt like they didn't matter anyway. Ham spent most of the story training an army off-screen, but like 75% of that army ended up being killed in a stupid assault anyway. Breeze spent the entire book using his calming abilities to recruit soldiers into the resistance, but in the end the entire city rose up because they like Kelsier anyway, so the recruiting didn't seem to be that important. Dockson... I honestly don't even remember what he did. Same for Clubs. Marsh was the only one that seemed to be doing something that ended up mattering, providing information about the Ministry and becoming an inquisitor himself, managing to find out the secret to killing the inquisitors and killing them all himself, I mean that's awesome! Aside from that though, the crew to me only seemed useful when explaining the nuances of their allomancy to Vin. They were basically tutorials explaining new mechanics. At least that's how they felt like to me.
The only characters aside from Vin and Kelsier that seemed to be utilized nicely were Sazed and Elend. Sazed was a really cool character. He wasn't just a "tutorial" even though he did explain quite a bit of things about the world and stuff like feruchemy, but he also had an actual good chemistry with Vin especially and I quite enjoyed their interactions. I felt a bit of a father-daughter vibe between him and Vin, whereas with Kelsier it was more of a sibling dynamic. Elend was a pretty good view into the world of nobles and he was pretty much the embodiment of "not everything is black and white". He's a noble yet he seems to care for the skaats. He shows Vin, who in turn teaches Kelsier, that murdering all the nobles is not the answer, that not all of them are bad, some of them are simply ignorant. I was fascinated by the fact that some of the nobles don't treat the skaats like crap because they are just evil, but because they've been brought up to believe that the skaats are a lesser race and that behavior like this is expected and justified. And yet some of the nobles, like Elend, still found conscience, wanted to learn more about them, realised that they are not so different from the nobles and perhaps behavior like this isn't justified after all. Elend's thought processes about this throughout the book were really interesting to me and part of me wishes that we could see a story like this from the perspective of a character like Elend, a member of a class that opresses other people believing it's okay and then slowly realising that it actually isn't. Pretty much a "are we the baddies?" story.
As for the story itself, it starts off pretty good and I thought Part One was okay. It's a perfectly reasonable introduction to a story, we meet our main characters, we learn a bit about their personalities and abilities, the magic system is introduced pretty nicely and all the important aspects of the world are showcased effectively. Then the book gets pretty slow though and this is my main gripe with it. Parts Two, Three and the first couple chapters of Part Four felt like a bit of a slog to me, apart from a few sequences. Again, it probably stems from the fact that I had different expectations for the book as I've heard a lot of people describe this story as a "heist". And it started as one, the plan was to start a revolution, get into the Lord Ruler's palace and steal his atium, we develop a plan where we decide what are the things we need to do to achieve this and we assign each member of the crew a goal. But then it gets reeeeally slow. I felt like 50% of the books was just Vin going to a ball, talking to some nobles, going back to the crew, everyone giving progress report, rinse and repeat. Most of the book felt like I was just watching the characters talk about their plan and not actually seeing the plan come to fruition, that was happening off-screen. I wasn't watching Breeze recruit soldiers, I was just watching him talk about how many he recruited last week. I wasn't watching March infiltrate the Ministry, I was just watching the other characters read a letter where he describes what he's done. I wasn't watching Kelsier murder nobles and creating tension between them, I was just seeing him come back to Renoux's manor and talking about it. Sure we had one chapter where Kelsier visited the army that was being trained, but even that didn't really show anything, it was more of a "look, this is what the characters did off-scrren, cool huh?". The only character that I was watching actually execute the plan was Vin, I was watching her become one of the nobles and spread false rumours between them. But honestly? That was probably one of the more boring parts of the whole plan and I found most of the balls rather dull, except for interactions with Elend. And in the end, we don't even do any "heist", cause the plan falls apart and things kind of just happen at the end.
There were some high points as well. Kelsier had a little action scene where he broke into a noble's mansion and stole atium from there, killing a couple of guards in the process. That was a nice scene, I just wish we could see more of that. There was also the attack on the palace where Kelsier and Vin tried to get into the special room and Vin almost dying in the process, that was a really cool sequence and is one my favourite chapters of the entire book. Though it was kinda stupid for the two main characters to just go into the Lord Ruler's palace completely on their own with no real preparation in advance, I mean what the hell were they expecting? But it was a cool fight so I'll forgive their foolishness. The part where Vin finds out about the plot to murder Elend and fights Shan on the roof was also super awesome. These are the things I wanted to see in this book when the magic system got introduced, I was really looking forward to Mistborn/Misting fights and I got almost none of them. What I got instead was a ton of talking and that was simply disappointing. My copy of the book is about 600 pages long and for every 100 pages of talking we get like 5 pages of fighting. Maybe it's my fault for expecting this to be an action book when it never claimed to be and never wanted to be, but I mean Elantris also wasn't really an action book, we didn't even have magic for most of it and yet I still found it very entertaining. Elantris didn't have fights every other chapter, but things were still happening. In Final Empire, it didn't feel that way.
Speaking of the magic system, I actually wasn't very impressed by it at all. The pulling/pushing on metals is a pretty unique ability and I loved how creatively it can be utilized to fly, use coins as "bullets" and a bunch of other stuff. But the rest of the abilities are just kind of... meh? If you're a Mistborn you can combine them fairly effectively, but if you are just a Misting and have only one of these abilities, unless it's an iron/steel one (and even there you really need both to be actually effective I'd say) they seem kind of pointless. You can calm or increase someone's emotions. Useful in some situations but not really a "fighting" ability. You can hide the fact that you're using allomancy from other allomancers. Like what do I do with that? I can hide my allomancy, but my allomancy is entirely limited to the ability to hide my allomancy. Same goes for detecting allomancy of other allomancers. Nice, I can find my enemies, but unless I have a team with me, I can do pretty much nothing against them. The increasing your senses/making yourself stronger is pretty okay, at least you are more capable of fighting I guess. So these abilities really seem like you need to have more of them available at once to actually be able to utilize them effectively, either by being a Mistborn or by being in a team. And yeah, we saw Kelsier and Vin use these together, but even then they were mostly using the physical ones, the emotional/discovery things were just kind of passive abilities that they had activated and that was that. I think it's a bit of a wasted opportunity to not have some sort of a team battle, where the various Mistings can cooperate and use their abilities together. But since our two main characters have all of these abilities at once, they don't necessarily need other people. Yeah yeah Kelsier said something like it's better to have an expert in one field rather than trying to do everything yourself, but in practice I just didn't feel like any of the other crewmembers were needed in a fight and frankly I don't think we ever really saw them in a fight. Perhaps I'm focusing on the fighting aspect a bit too much and not seeing the other areas where these abilities are useful, but I haven't really seen an example of the abilities being extra useful in other situations. And when they were used in other situations, I just didn't find it that impressive. I don't know, I like the idea of this magic system but its execution seems a bit sloppy. Atium is really cool though and I love it's utilization in fights.
Let's talk about the ending now. I've already become familiar with the term Sanderlanche where the ending is so gripping that I can't put it down. I felt like Elantris had an ending like this and though I was able to put it down (simply because I don't read more than an hour on any given day for personal reasons) I still really liked it and was looking forward to the next reading session. With Final Empire, I didn't really feel like the ending was THAT gripping. The end of Part Four was awesome and things escalated super quickly which I really liked. The battle between Kelsier and the inquisitor + the guards was in my opinion the best sequence in the entire book and I was having a really good time reading it, THIS is what I wanted more of in the book. The arrival of Lord Ruler was terrifying, his sheer power seemed absolutely overwhelming and I couldn't see how the hell were our heroes going to defeat him. Kelsier's death at his hands was extremely shocking to me. I have heard the names of Kelsier and Vin with relation to this series countless times before and I always assumed they are the two main characters that we are following for the entire trilogy. So seeing Kelsier die in the first book already was completely unexpected and it took me a couple of chapters to actually accept the fact that he's dead, I kept thinking he was gonna come back somehow (Renoux kinda tricked me at one point into believing that that's happening but nope).
The actual climax after that though wasn't as great though. I mean it was fine but if I had to compare, I would say I liked the ending to Elantris much more. The uprising of the skaats throughout the city came a bit out of nowhere. Like yeah I know Kelsier was being nice to them throughout the book, built up his reputation and then died a martyr to stir their emotions but still. The entire book we've been working towards this big plan and in the end it was all thrown away and we kind of just improvised with a resistance that suddenly formed spontaneously. The only thing that went according to the plan was the nobles starting a war amongst themselves, everything else just kind of happened. And yeah I get that secretly this WAS Kelsier's plan all along, but he did want the other things to work too right? Apperently they didn't need to, so the whole plan with the army and everything was kind of pointless. Or did he make up this plan about becoming a martyr after they lost the army? I'm rambling a bit now though so let's get back to the point.
Vin's final confrontation with the Lord Ruler was a little weird tbh. First she just marched in thinking she can beat him, realised he's too powerful and got captured. Then Sazed and Elend save her and she... marches in thinking she can beat him, releases he's too powerful and almost gets killed. Sure she had a slightly different plan at each attempt but still, it felt a bit sudden and reckless. I guess that's what Vin is but I just didn't really like the way this ending went about. It felt like Brandon spend 50% of the book writing about balls and nobles, then realised the book was getting too long and needs to end at some point so he quickly made all the main players meet and fight and that was that. I just didn't like the pacing of it I guess. The way Vin defeated Lord Ruler also didn't seem very satisfying. I liked the reveal that he isn't actually the person who wrote the logbook but instead a servant who killed the author of that and became the Lord himself. But the whole Eleventh Metal thing... I mean yeah, that's what made Vin realise who Lord Ruler is and where his abilities come from, I guess I was just expecting something a lot different and as a result was disappointed by this. I thought the Eleventh Metal would be a cool new fighting ability, instead it's just a backstory revealing thing that gave Vin information she needed. And then she suddenly had the strength to pull out the rings from Lord Ruler's body which made him lose his power. Why was she strong enough to do that? I guess that's something the next books will explain but the only explanation to that really is that she is somehow special and that just feels... cheap. We defeated the main villain not by some trickery or hard work or something but simply because our main character found out some information and then just happened to have enough strength to be able to exploit that. It just didn't really feel earned, especially since Lord Ruler was built up as an absolutely OP god-like being. I didn't enjoy it much.
I loved Marsh's role in all of this though. I reaaaally wish we got to see more of Marsh in this book. Imagine following him as he slowly infiltrates the Ministry, becomes one of the inquisitors and learn all of their dark secrets. Wouldn't that be a much cooler and exciting story than watching Vin go to 7 different balls and talk to a bunch of nobles?
Phew okay, this was a super long post, but I tend to write a lot when I'm describing things I didn't like xD. Overall I wouldn't say the book was too bad, it was still fairly entertaining, though the middle part was really dragging at parts and it didn't have nowhere near as much action as I was hoping for. Elantris is the only other book from Cosmere I've read and I couldn't help but constantly compare Final Empire to it. Elantris was a book where it felt like we made progress in every chapter, whereas in Final Empire, it felt like barely anything was progressing for half of the book (and even the little progress that there was was happening off-screen). With Elantris the ending was gradually escalanting until we got to a final battle, but in Final Empire we had not much happening, then Kelsier gets into a fight in which he dies, that triggers the uprising and suddenly we killed the main villain. I mentioned how Elantris' ending made me excited every time I finished reading to read again the next day. With Final Empire the ending was so sudden I basically read all of it in a single session, not because I couldn't put the book away and made my session longer, but because the ending was so quick I didn't need more time than that to read it.
I've seen a lot of people say Elantris isn't their favourites, it's Brandon's first published book after all and his weaknesses are much more on display. On the other hand I've seen a lot of people praise Mistborn and say that it's one of their favourite series with Final Empire itself ranking quite high. But after reading both, I have to say that I actually liked Elantris more, way more. Maybe I'll see things differently once I read the entirety of Era 1 and will see the bigger picture, but as a book on its own, I don't think Final Empire is that good. Like I said, it's not a bad book, but I feel like it had a lot of missed potential and focused on the wrong things, or rather it didn't focus on the things I personally wanted it to. It didn't really suit my taste is what I'm trying to say I guess. It also didn't help that it took me a long time to read the book, I read Elantris in less than 3 weeks but Final Empire took me almost a month (both books are pretty much the same in length). I'm not sure if the book felt slow and boring because I was reading it too slow OR if the book was actually slow and boring and that made me read less. Either way though, in terms of a tierlist, I'd put Final Empire in a B-tier, borderline C-tier. For comparison I've put Elantris in A-tier so far.
Hopefully the other two books will suit my tastes a little more, we'll see. I've read the blurb on the back of my copy of Well of Ascension and it already seems more interesting than Final Empire, so I'm hopeful but cautious. Sorry for the super lengthy post but if you've read this far, please let me know, what did you think about this book? If you're one of the people who love it, why? What are the things that make this book stand out for you? Or did you have similar feelings as me? Do you think I'll enjoy the other two books based on my opinions on the first one?
EDIT: Yes, I realise this post is long as hell, I don't need 5 people to tell me that. If you don't wanna read it I completely understand, I probably wouldn't either. But if that's the case I really don't see why you feel the need to spam my feed with "lol, long post" messages. Sorry for coming off a bit aggressive here but I came here to discuss the book, not the length of my post.